Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us Phil Pugliese (31 Aug 2016 17:28 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us
tmr0195@xxxxxx
(31 Aug 2016 19:50 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us
tmr0195@xxxxxx
(31 Aug 2016 20:59 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us
shadow@xxxxxx
(31 Aug 2016 23:39 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us Phil Pugliese 31 Aug 2016 17:28 UTC
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Look up the opening sequence of the old TV series 'Branded' c.1965 (starring the same guy who played the lead in the 'Rifleman' series). It's shows the lead character getting 'drummed out' of the US Army. I esp recall the part where the commanding officer breaks the guy's saber over his knee & throws the 'stub' out of the open gate of the fort. After which the guy is also sent out, where he picks it up & ponders. The guy carried that 'short' saber w/ him & it became a sort of trademark of his. "All but one man died, there at ?????? Creek" ...................................... "BRANDED!! Cursed as the one who ran. What do you do when you're branded, & you know you're a man!" ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- On Tue, 8/30/16, Freelance Traveller <xxxxxx@freelancetraveller.com> wrote: Subject: [TML] No Longer One Of Us To: "The Traveller Mailing List" <xxxxxx@simplelists.com> Date: Tuesday, August 30, 2016, 4:45 PM It's not often shown in fiction (though occasionally it is), but a character who has been discharged from service (or written out of the family/clan, or some other generally-equivalent situation) with dishonor often makes for good story-telling, especially if the discharge and the dishonor were undeserved. I'm going to, once again, see if I can come up with a story that's worth sharing if it gets completed. (Yes, I said 'if'. I don't have a very good record on that score...) My current idea is to start the story with the flashback to the day that the protagonist was 'read out' of the service (or whatever you wish to call the event). Unfortunately, I don't have very many examples of such a 'ceremony', and I'd like some ideas. Does anyone have any that they'd like to share? They can be real-world, fictional, from any service, club, clan, et cetera, a mash-up of any combination of the above, whatever, as long as the result 'feels realistic'. (Yes, I more-or-less recall the Honor Harrington scene where Pavel Young was drummed out of the RMN, and also the scene from ST:TNG where Worf was discommended.) The setting is intended to be largely compatible with the Third Imperium setting of Classic/Mongoose Traveller (i.e., not an Expansion (M0), Rebellion, or New Era setting), but the location hasn't been determined, and neither has the service that the protagonist formerly served in (which need not be Imperial, or even an Imperial world; Julian, Solomani, or minor Human polity are all valid choices - the only constraints, really, are that the character is Human, and there will not be any psionics in the story). Help? -- Jeff Zeitlin, Editor Freelance Traveller The Electronic Fan-Supported Traveller® Fanzine and Resource xxxxxx@freelancetraveller.com http://www.freelancetraveller.com http://freelancetraveller.downport.com/ ®Traveller is a registered trademark of Far Future Enterprises, 1977-2014. Use of the trademark in this notice and in the referenced materials is not intended to infringe or devalue the trademark. Freelance Traveller extends its thanks to the following enterprises for hosting services: CyberNET Web Hosting (http://www.cyberwebhosting.net) The Traveller Downport (http://www.downport.com) ----- The Traveller Mailing List Archives at http://archives.simplelists.com/tml Report problems to xxxxxx@simplelists.com To unsubscribe from this list please goto http://www.simplelists.com/confirm.php?u=EwREIRgLK8vaUEhNlnoNdSGKwnjoID8a