No Longer One Of Us
Freelance Traveller
(30 Aug 2016 23:45 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us
Andrew Staples
(31 Aug 2016 00:06 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us
Kurt Feltenberger
(31 Aug 2016 01:00 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us
Joseph Paul
(31 Aug 2016 01:50 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us
Richard Aiken
(31 Aug 2016 03:42 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us
shadow@xxxxxx
(31 Aug 2016 23:50 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us shadow@xxxxxx (31 Aug 2016 21:16 UTC)
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Re: [TML] No Longer One Of Us shadow@xxxxxx 31 Aug 2016 21:14 UTC
On 30 Aug 2016 at 19:45, Freelance Traveller wrote: > I'm going to, once again, see if I can come up with a story that's > worth sharing if it gets completed. (Yes, I said 'if'. I don't have a > very good record on that score...) My current idea is to start the > story with the flashback to the day that the protagonist was 'read > out' of the service (or whatever you wish to call the event). > Unfortunately, I don't have very many examples of such a 'ceremony', > and I'd like some ideas. Does anyone have any that they'd like to > share? They can be real-world, fictional, from any service, club, > clan, et cetera, a mash-up of any combination of the above, whatever, > as long as the result 'feels realistic'. (Yes, I more-or-less recall > the Honor Harrington scene where Pavel Young was drummed out of the > RMN, and also the scene from ST:TNG where Worf was discommended.) If you can locate a copy of the first episode of the old Chuck Connors tv series "Branded" it has him getting drummed out of the Us Cavalry for cowardice. -- Leonard Erickson (aka shadow) shadow at shadowgard dot com